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Nikki Fernandez was one of the middle section survivors from Flight 815 and is first introduced in "Further Instructions". She had spent most of her time on the island trying to recover the $8 million diamonds she and Paulo had stolen from Zukerman, her staged lover, before the crash. She received a Medusa spider bite that induced a deathlike paralysis and she died after being buried alive alongside Paulo.
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Old May 24th, 2007, 09:09 PM

Default My Vison of Lost (season one - three) (correct spelling)

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disclaimer: I did not own lost or any of the characters on the show.
Summery: In my Vision Ana Lucia Cortez on the show since season one and also her sister in-law (of her Twin Bother Jose), Hope Cortez and her baby girls which she deliver on the island four days after the crush. Hope a crime scene Investigation who was work in Australia through on exchanges program, She was oceanic flight 815 for two reason. First reason is help the FBI agent bring Kate back to the State and the second to go home to have her Baby.

Day one, right after the crush happen. Jack and Ana Lucia come to, and find them self lay right next to eachother. They both look at eachother.
Jack: it a good thing you come up to my roll of seat to have that drink.
Ana: Yeah, because if i was in the tail end I would of crush somewhere in the ocean and be die right now.
Just then and a golden retriever run past them and further into the jungle. Just then Ana look around and can't see anyone else from that section of the plane.
Ana: Jack where the rest of the section of the plane we was on?
Jack: I think it on the beach.
Ana: I have to find my sister in-law, she pregnant and is eight months and three weeks into the pregnancy.
Jack: Why was she even on the plane them Ana?
Ana: go back to the states to have the baby and helping a FBI agent bring a prisoner back to the states.
Jack and Ana stand up and run to the beach to see the plane and everyone try to help the injury and /or trap out. They hear a women scream.
Claire: Somebody Help I'm have contraction
Jack and Ana run up to her.
Jack: what your name?
Claire: I'm Claire
Jack: Ok Claire how far along are you?
Claire: just enter my nine month.
Ana and Jack help her up and get her to a section of the beach away from the plane and it fuel smell.
Jack: you need to stay still, and let hope the contraction stop.
Just then another very pregnant women come run over to them, and hug Ana.
Ana: Are you ok Hope?
Hope: Yeah I'm great, but the FBI agent I was with as a piece of the plane stick in his stomach.
Jack: show me where he at, I'm a doctor. Ana Stay with Claire.
Jack and Hope walk to were the FBI agent is, as Kate walk out of the jungle and onto the beach.


Ana Lucia is sit next to Claire on the beach when a Africa- America boy walk up to them.
Walt: Hi, My name Walt. I just want to ask if you see my dog Vincent?
Ana: Is you dog a golden retriever?
Walt: Yeah
Ana: I seen your dog, when I was walk out of the jungle, he around here somewhere.
Walt: thanks
Walt run over up yo his Dad.
Walt: Michael, Vincent still a Live the Women with the dark hair over there see him.
Michael: I tell you he was fine Walt.
Over By The FBI agent Jack is look at his wound and Hope is stand there watch Jack work, when she see Kate walk up to her.
Kate: Mrs. Cortez can I talk to you.
Hope: Sure
Kate and Hope walk into the jungle so they can talk without been over hear.
Kate: Are you going to tell people about me be a warrant fugitive?
Hope: no, because it does not matter here, and From My point of view, the evidence on you for kill your step- father is shake at best and a Police office Killed the Guy that was in the car with you, Not You Kate. And why we are on this island call me Hope, not Mrs. Cortez.
Kate: ok.
The two of them walk back out of the jungle at the sometime Ana walk up to them.
Ana: Rose Is sit with Claire, I want to see how the FBI is doing I know him, From be a Cop in LA.
Jack: Not good he need to be in a hospital. I have done what I can for right now.
Kate: You did not take the piece of the plane out of his stomach.
Jack: for now it best to leave it in, if will Help has not come by tomorrow night I take it out. What three of you can do is help go through bag and find has much medicine as you can.
The three Girls: sure.

Anna Lucia, Hope and Kate walk away from the FBI agent and Jack and start going through all the bags.
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Anna Lucia, Hope and Kate have just finish going through all the bags and are taking the medicine they find over to Jack. Jack stops working on the FBI agent and takes the medicines from the three ladies. Anna Lucia looks over at Hope and she sees that Hope is holding her back.

Anna Lucia: Hope is everything ok?
Hope: Yeah, I am fine, I am not in labor Anna, don’t start baby me!
Anna Lucia: I was just check you are carrying my twin brother baby!
Jack: Are you sure you are fine Hope seen that it is very close to your due date?
Hope: I am fine!
Jack: I think I should give you a check up and make sure everything are right with you and the baby.
Hope: Ok.
Jack: Anna Lucia will you go and check on Claire and see if she has any more contractions?
Anna Lucia: Sure
Jack: Kate will you go gather up wood to start a singer fire?
Kate: Sure.

Kate walks towards the wood area and starts to gather up wood. Anna Lucia walks away from her sisters’ in-law and towards Rose and Claire. Jack picks up his book bag, which is his carry on bag that he find on his way over to the FBI agent. Then Hope and Jack walk over to a quiet area, which has a large log laying on the ground. Jack help Hope set down onto the log and kneels down in front of her. Jack then takes his stethoscope out of his book bag. He puts the stethoscope into his ears and place it onto Hope stomach and finds the baby heart beat right a way.

Jack: The baby has a strong heart beat, do you know if you are having a boy or a girl baby?
Hope: Sigh I am having a girl
Jack: Have you had any issues doing the pregnancy I should know about?
Hope: I was going to have quadruplets, but when I was eight weeks along I was shoot five times in my Pelvis and lost three of the babies.
Jack: Was there anyother problems during the pregnancy that I need to know about?
Hope: No
Jack: Ok. Everything seems fine.
Hope: Good.

Anna Lucia has check with Claire and is now walking back over to Jack. Jack stands up when Anna Lucia walks over to him and Hope.

Jack: Has Claire had any more contractions?
Anna Lucia: No they have stops.
Jack: That good.
Anna Lucia: Hope I think the two of us should go take a look around and see if we can find Walt dog and look for any Luggage that survived the crush and maybe we can found that obgyn and birthing Equipment that were brought onto the plane in cause you are Claire went into labor or get short of breath doing the flight.
Hope: Like that portable Logiqbook (Ultrasound)?
Anna Lucia: Yeah, maybe we will find you carrying on bag Hope and other medical supplies that Jack will be able to use.
Jack: That a great Idea and can you keep an eye out for fresh water supply too?
Anna Lucia: Sure

Anna Lucia and Hope’s walks away from Jack and looks at everyone that survived the crush as they walk towards the woods area. They see Hurley passes out food trays for the plane to everyone. They then see Walt look around the beach for his dog. When they have walked into the woods Anna Lucia and Hope stop walking and see Hope’s book bag that she was use as a carrying bag laying by Anna Lucia feet. Hope kneels down and unzips her book bag. She then sees that no one has taken anything out of it. She grabs her spare Sig 9mm handgun out of the book bag, she then pull a empty magazine out of the bag and loads it. Hope puts the magazine into the gun and hands it to her sister- in law.

Anna Lucia: Hope Don’t you need this gun yourself?
Hope: It my spare.

Hope lift up her pink empire waist blouse to show Anna Lucia that she wear her gun belt and that she has the Sig that Anna Lucia brother and her husband giver her as a first wedding anniversary. She puts her shirt down and then rezip the book bag. She then puts the book on her back and the two of them start walks. Anna Lucia puts the gun into the back of her jean and pulls her black tank top and brown leather jacket over the handgun, as they are walking and looking for medical supplies and luggage. After walking for a few more minutes they find a wheelchair.

Anna Lucia: This would help us move anything we find back to the beach.
Hope: Yeah it will if we find anything.

Anna Lucia pushes the wheelchair and they keep walking and looking for anything they get find. A minutes later Hope feet hits a large bag. Anna Lucia and Hope look down to see the bag hope feet hit along with two other bag.

Anna Lucia: They three different types of first aid bags.
Hope: That will help Jack.

Anna Lucia and Hope kneel down and look at the bag Hope open up the first bag which is a Rescue One first aid kit. Her and Anna sees that it has a list of what in the first a kit.

Anna Lucia: it has 1-EMS Box 1-First Aid Booklet and two Instant Ice Packs, two ACE Bandage, one Bandage Scissors, four Pair Latex Gloves, five two by two Gauze Pads, five three by three Gauze Pads, six four by four Gauze Pads, twelve Triple Antibiotics, four Eye Pads, twelve Antiseptic Wipes, one Tweezers, one Thermometer, one Tissue Pack, one Eye Wash, four Small Rolls Tape, two Blood Stoppers, one Wire Splint, one Box Butterfly Bandages, four Tongue Depressors, one CPR Mouthpiece, four Burn Free Dressings, one Box Patch Bandages, two Triangular Bandages, one Box one by three Bandages,
two four by four Burn Free, Two gauze rolls two by six yds, one Dr pen light, four five by nine combine dressing bandages. Hope zips the bag back up and Anna Lucia puts it on the seat of the wheelchair. Anna Lucia then unzips the next bag which is The Ultimate First-Aid Kit. There is also a list say what in the kit.

Hope: There is three ammonia inhalants, one oral thermometer, twenty alcohol prep pads, ten BZK antiseptic towelettes, twelve triple antibiotic ointment packs, eight non aspirin pain relievers, four tongue depressors, hundred and thirteen standard bandages, ten spot bandages, four porous 1/2" tapes, two transpore tapes, two micropore tapes, twenty-five hard tack candles, one whistle, fourteen oz. eye wash, one waterproof/windproof matches, one bottle Thryoblock, one marking pen, ten 2"x3" nonadhesive pads, ten 3"x4" nonadhesive pads, 2 1" porous cloth tapes, two triangle bandages, one tissue pack, fifteen providone iodine pads, one portable Aqua, three round eye pads, ten extra large bandages, two facial soaps, one pair tweezers, two Ivy Cleanse towelettes, three Mitigator Sting & Bite Treatments, four large butterfly bandages, five medium butterfly bandages, six knuckle bandages, five fingertip bandages, one pair bandage scissors, two 3" elastic bandages, one pair EMT shears, one penlight, one red flag, two 5"x9" ABD pads, three 2" gauze bandages, one bite and sting first-aid kit, one yellow writing pad, three 4" gauze bandages, two N95 respirator masks, one BrushNow toothbrush, one nylon cord, 2 8"x10" ABD pads, three 3" gauze bandages, one hot compress, three instant cold packs, three drinking water pouches, one flexible splint, one molefoam, one moleskin, one CPR microshield, one emergency blanket, ten medium vinyl exam gloves, ten large vinyl exam gloves, two 4"x4" BurnFree dressings, one 8"x8" BurnFree dressing, four oz. BurnFree, one First Aid: First on the scene book, one miligary-style surgical kit, one blood pressure cuff, one padded finger splint, four safety pins, one 2" elastic band, two adhesive hand & body warmers, one hand sanitizer, one emergency sleeping bag, four single-dose BurnFree packets, one 30-minute red lightstick, one five-minute lightstick.

Hope zips the bag up and lift the first bag up then Anna Lucia grab the bag that Hope just zip up and put it on to the wheelchair seat. Hope then put the smaller bag on top. They see the last first aid kit laying on the ground and Anna Lucia pick it up and unzips it. The two ladys see that this is a Surgical Kit.

Anna Lucia: It Contents one Penlight (that has AAA battery already in it), two #11 scalpel with 2 blades, three lancing tool, one tweezers, four hemostats, two suture packs, two sanitary wipes, and four dental pick.

Anna Lucia zips the surgical kit up and set it on top of the other two kits. Hope starts walking again and Anna Lucia start pushes the wheelchair again. Then put of no where a yellow lab comes running out of the trees. Hope grabs it dog collar and put the ropes she bring with around the collar. They find three bags of Luggage and two obgyn Kits. Anna Lucia and zips one of the kits bags and sees it list.

Anna Lucia: It has two Pair Sterile Gloves, three Drape sheet, two Sterile Umbilical Clamps, three O.B. Towelettes, two Alcohol preps medium, four Sterile OB Pad, four Plastic Placenta Bag, four Gauze sponges, two Sterile Bulb Syringe, five Disposable towels, two Nylon yie-offs, one Disposable Scalpel, two Twist Ties two receiving blanket.

Anna Lucia then zips the kit back up then Hope, Anna Lucia and the dog head back to the beach because it is starting to get dark in the woods. When Anna pushes the wheelchair and Hope has Vincent on a rope walk onto the beach. Walt sees that Hope has Vincent and runs over to her.

Walt: Thanks you for find Vincent for me.
Hope: Your welcome
Hope hand Walt the rope and then he and the dog run over to Michael. Then Anna pushes the wheelchair with all the bags and Hope walk over to Jack who is working on the FBI Agent Edward Mars.
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