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Old June 11th, 2008, 05:20 PM

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^^ Nice. You really captured some of Sawyer's inner thoughts here. I also like the constant questioning of feelings and things surrounding him, b/c Sawyer is a mystery to the audience and also to himself. I think this season, he has really started to discover his inner-worth and purpose, but this poem leads up to it nicely. Great work!
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