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Old May 24th, 2007, 09:09 PM

Default My Vison of Lost (season one - three) (correct spelling)

By: Shannonrosewiley
disclaimer: I did not own lost or any of the characters on the show.
Summery: In my Vision Ana Lucia Cortez on the show since season one and also her sister in-law (of her Twin Bother Jose), Hope Cortez and her baby girls which she deliver on the island four days after the crush. Hope a crime scene Investigation who was work in Australia through on exchanges program, She was oceanic flight 815 for two reason. First reason is help the FBI agent bring Kate back to the State and the second to go home to have her Baby.

Day one, right after the crush happen. Jack and Ana Lucia come to, and find them self lay right next to eachother. They both look at eachother.
Jack: it a good thing you come up to my roll of seat to have that drink.
Ana: Yeah, because if i was in the tail end I would of crush somewhere in the ocean and be die right now.
Just then and a golden retriever run past them and further into the jungle. Just then Ana look around and can't see anyone else from that section of the plane.
Ana: Jack where the rest of the section of the plane we was on?
Jack: I think it on the beach.
Ana: I have to find my sister in-law, she pregnant and is eight months and three weeks into the pregnancy.
Jack: Why was she even on the plane them Ana?
Ana: go back to the states to have the baby and helping a FBI agent bring a prisoner back to the states.
Jack and Ana stand up and run to the beach to see the plane and everyone try to help the injury and /or trap out. They hear a women scream.
Claire: Somebody Help I'm have contraction
Jack and Ana run up to her.
Jack: what your name?
Claire: I'm Claire
Jack: Ok Claire how far along are you?
Claire: just enter my nine month.
Ana and Jack help her up and get her to a section of the beach away from the plane and it fuel smell.
Jack: you need to stay still, and let hope the contraction stop.
Just then another very pregnant women come run over to them, and hug Ana.
Ana: Are you ok Hope?
Hope: Yeah I'm great, but the FBI agent I was with as a piece of the plane stick in his stomach.
Jack: show me where he at, I'm a doctor. Ana Stay with Claire.
Jack and Hope walk to were the FBI agent is, as Kate walk out of the jungle and onto the beach.


Ana Lucia is sit next to Claire on the beach when a Africa- America boy walk up to them.
Walt: Hi, My name Walt. I just want to ask if you see my dog Vincent?
Ana: Is you dog a golden retriever?
Walt: Yeah
Ana: I seen your dog, when I was walk out of the jungle, he around here somewhere.
Walt: thanks
Walt run over up yo his Dad.
Walt: Michael, Vincent still a Live the Women with the dark hair over there see him.
Michael: I tell you he was fine Walt.
Over By The FBI agent Jack is look at his wound and Hope is stand there watch Jack work, when she see Kate walk up to her.
Kate: Mrs. Cortez can I talk to you.
Hope: Sure
Kate and Hope walk into the jungle so they can talk without been over hear.
Kate: Are you going to tell people about me be a warrant fugitive?
Hope: no, because it does not matter here, and From My point of view, the evidence on you for kill your step- father is shake at best and a Police office Killed the Guy that was in the car with you, Not You Kate. And why we are on this island call me Hope, not Mrs. Cortez.
Kate: ok.
The two of them walk back out of the jungle at the sometime Ana walk up to them.
Ana: Rose Is sit with Claire, I want to see how the FBI is doing I know him, From be a Cop in LA.
Jack: Not good he need to be in a hospital. I have done what I can for right now.
Kate: You did not take the piece of the plane out of his stomach.
Jack: for now it best to leave it in, if will Help has not come by tomorrow night I take it out. What three of you can do is help go through bag and find has much medicine as you can.
The three Girls: sure.

Anna Lucia, Hope and Kate walk away from the FBI agent and Jack and start going through all the bags.
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